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Post by ClearStar on Jul 12, 2009 21:41:31 GMT -4
All IcePaw recalled in these moments were sheer pain, like lightning in her throat, And the strangest sensation of flying through the air.
(to make things more interesting, and to elongate the fight I'm throwing in an unreal element)
IcePaw's broken body lie on the marshy ground, just short of a thick pine tree. she had, however, skimmed a sharp bush and a few rocks were embedded into her skin from the landing. But she felt strong. stronger than she had ever drempt of being. she unsheathed her claws and raked the ground next to her, leaving deep holes. she drug herself to a standing position, and fueled by her anger, launched herslef at EclipsedStar. Her eyes were nearly glowing [lol just like the BBA wolves] and her teeth felt longer somehow. she landed square on his massive shoulders and sank her teeth deep into his flesh. she felt herself rake her claws into his back and belly fur, leaving a stream on red dripping to the ground.
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Post by wolfauthor on Jul 12, 2009 21:49:33 GMT -4
His eyes flashed with anger as his blood dripped on the ground. "I'LL KILL YOU **** STORMCLAN!" he yelled. He lept at her. His fangs going into the top of her head. His claws dig into her shoulder. He pulled his fangs out. "YOU **** CAT, YOU PATHETIC THING! YOUR NOTHING BUT A STUPID, SMALL, CAT! MORE LIKE DIRT! yOUR SLOW, YOUR STUPID, WHAT IS YOUR WORTH?! I'LL KILL YOU **** STORMCLAN!" His jaws locked on her throat. He started to choke her.
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Post by ClearStar on Jul 12, 2009 22:06:13 GMT -4
Icepaw could no longer hear anything. just a static noise bounced through her ears. She sensed slight pain, but nothing more than what felt like thorns in her pelt. She saw the burning anger in EclipsedStar's eyes when his jaws locked into her throat. she realized he was trying to choke her and she laughed. Then, out of nowhere, she fell to the ground and rolled onto her back. Pumbling his soft belly tissues with her hind paws she slashed his Left ear, leaving it in three shreads. then, once again, her claws clamped into his shoulders, drawing new blood. She tossed her head to one side and it hit her: this all wasn't his blood. she was gushing blood too, from her neck and head, from her flanks, from her back. IcePaw needed to end this fight soon, one way or another.
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Post by wolfauthor on Jul 12, 2009 22:26:20 GMT -4
He didn't hesitate to grab her again. His teeth sunk into her head. He bit down. How could a scrawny cat like this have a chance of beating a huge tom cat like him? Really, this cat had thrown herself what seemed a death wish. And Eclispedstar would not hestitate at killing a stupid cat like her.
He threw her again. But lept upon her before she even had a chance to get up. He grabbed her by her neck and threw her into a pine. He heard a crack.
Her shoulder.
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Post by ClearStar on Jul 13, 2009 11:30:00 GMT -4
IcePaw was tossed limply into another tree. She had let her guard down! How could I!?! She thought. then she felt a slight cracking pain in her right shoulder blade, and when she hit the ground and tried to crawl back up, she was unable to move the leg. *curse word she thought, this is all my fault!!
"I'll never give up!!!" She roared with anger and nearly flew at EclipsedStar, Raking her claws deep into his left flank, with her remaining forepaw. Blood was spattering everything. she couldn't go on much longer. "I'll never give up.." she whispered, half to herself.
Spinning around before he could, she gave him a swift bite to the tail, which made him extremely angry. Darting out of the way of a bone crunching bite, she threw her last blow at his eyes, his dark evil eyes.
She limped to the foot of an random tree, collapsing, and catching her breath. she was going to die. she knew she was going to die. EclipsedStar casually trotted over, as if there had been no fight at all.
Before she blacked out, she saw a cat. not EclipsedStar, a tortishell manx. and she knew she had a chance. "thanks for coming back for me...." IcePaw managed to mew under her breath.
*IcePaw blacks out. you contine with JitterLeaf and EclipsedStar. Somehow she convinces him not to kill IcePaw, but to make her a part of FrostClan, because IcePaw would never be welcomed by ClearStar again.*
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Post by wolfauthor on Jul 13, 2009 18:40:31 GMT -4
Eclispedstar flashed with anger as the stupid cat raked into his left flank. He turned around fast to bite her but she got his tail. He roared with anger. Not from pain but pure anger. He went around to bite her but she slashed at his eyes. He dodged it, and in a counter attack hit his head agiainst hers. It didn't hurt to him but it must to the stupid cat. She limped over to a tree and fell. He walked over to her as if nothing had happened. Which to him didn't. He knew what to do next. To give her a fatal nape bite. To end this stupid fight. Were did a stupid, small, stormclan cat think she could beat the, muscular, smart, leader of Frostclan? What a stupid cat! "Leave her alone!" Jitterleaf yelled. The manx was bolting fast. Manx's were known for be as fast as a jack rabbit and to jump like a jack rabbit. She had tears down her face. She seemed to have been crying. "Get the H*ll off of her!" Eclispedstar prepared for the attack. Jitterleaf dodged his long claws and hit him square in the chest. It knocked some off the air out Eclispedstar. But Eclispedstar got on manx and pinned her to the ground. He hissed to her,"You'll fall to her same fate." He got rewady to slash her in the eye but Jitterleaf moved her head and only got the tip off her whisker chopped off. Eclispedstar seemed angered. "Kill me but leave her!" Jitterleaf yelled, crying. "Pathetic Stormclan you are both, crossing into my territory," he hissed at her. "S-she's going to be the clan's next leader," Jitterleaf said, lying for Icepaw's safety. Eclispedsstar could tell the benfits. He grabbed the Stormclan by the scruff of her neck "Ah," Jitterleaf said. He threw her. She was thrown far. She got up and shook herself off. She didn't look good. She got up and prepared to attack Ecilspedstar agian. But found that she was on the other side of the border. The medicne cat hissed. She started to let a few tears go. She was no match. She had did all she could for Icepaw.
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Post by ClearStar on Jul 13, 2009 19:06:24 GMT -4
IcePaw found herself walking through thick black mist. it was so thick she couldn't see her paws on the cold stone floor. she didn't recall what had happend just seconds ago, she just kept walking. soon she heard echos of voices, lots of strange voices. where am I? she thought to herself. The voices were meowing, she knew they were cats, but what cats? IcePaw peered through the heavy haze and could barely make out the shapes of countless cats. "There she is!" one of the voices yowled. "Welcome to SpiritClan" another mewed. IcePaw gasped. was she dead?! "Ah, don't worry, your not dead. yet." the voice mewed again, then laughed. "see, things havn't worked out the way they were supposed to, so..." the she-cat trailed off. "What? so... what?" she asked, praying she wasn't going to die yet. "So were working on sending a sign to EclipsedStar and JitterLeaf. to prove you have to live." IcePaw let out her held breath, still tense from the memories that had come flooding back from the fight. "then, what am I doing here?" she asked. "we need to tell you this: you will become a medicine cat, and you will live on."
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Post by ClearStar on Jul 13, 2009 19:36:49 GMT -4
IcePaw jolted awake. she let out a shreik when she realized that EclipsedStar was still looming above her tattered body. please send the sign, just send it! she pleaded to SpiritClan.
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Post by wolfauthor on Jul 14, 2009 17:08:34 GMT -4
He smiled evily at her and pinned her with ease. She was weak. He smiled evily at her. He was going to make her cry. "What is stopping me from killing you know?" He tilted his head, still smiling evily.
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Post by ClearStar on Jul 14, 2009 17:22:33 GMT -4
IcePaw stared into EclipsedStar's black eyes. she was tired of him playing games, saying 'what's keeping me from killing you' too many times. "If you wanted to kill me you would have already." Icepaw breathed, she had no strength. if he did want to kill her, this would be his chance.
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